Hello there are some grammatical issues within this document which hinder the reader's understanding pleases can you rectify.. and check the document thoroughly as previously advised.
e.g. The suit his wearing is dirty and has dried blood on. She has a drink her hand and it obvious she is not having a good time. Starts with close ups of a boy walking though a woods. The ball in the woods then falls to his knees in the middle of the woods, he grabs some dirt and he lets it run though his bloodied fingers and he looks up at Sky.
note the ideas you have are strong and it would be great to see them developed further ..
one final issue you need to link each idea to a video if it exists that is similar to the one you have... you may for example draw inspiration from a similar type of shooting environment or type of lighting, lyrics, etc. INCLUDE LINKS WITHIN A presentation..
Hello there are some grammatical issues within this document which hinder the reader's understanding pleases can you rectify.. and check the document thoroughly as previously advised.
ReplyDeletee.g. The suit his wearing is dirty and has dried blood on.
She has a drink her hand and it obvious she is not having a good time.
Starts with close ups of a boy walking though a woods.
The ball in the woods then falls to his knees in the middle of the woods, he grabs some dirt and he lets it run though his bloodied fingers and he looks up at Sky.
note the ideas you have are strong and it would be great to see them developed further ..
one final issue you need to link each idea to a video if it exists that is similar to the one you have... you may for example draw inspiration from a similar type of shooting environment or type of lighting, lyrics, etc. INCLUDE LINKS WITHIN A presentation..