OK much improved here Zoe, there ares a few ways you could improve on the presentation including a few slides on the theory... for example Barthes enigma code could be applied as the enigma is what is inside the box the man/women carries into the club, it is covered with a cloth. There are other enigmas such as the key, what is its purpose and then the semantics of the "pink toy" all are worth exploring. Finally as emphasised previously you do need to identify areas of the video which you could exploit for use in your work... you could do this within the Prezi or as a footnote underneath the Prezi
a good analysis but there is a need for more detail and visuals to be added.. also ensure theory is adequately addressed.
ReplyDeleteOK much improved here Zoe, there ares a few ways you could improve on the presentation including a few slides on the theory... for example Barthes enigma code could be applied as the enigma is what is inside the box the man/women carries into the club, it is covered with a cloth. There are other enigmas such as the key, what is its purpose and then the semantics of the "pink toy" all are worth exploring. Finally as emphasised previously you do need to identify areas of the video which you could exploit for use in your work... you could do this within the Prezi or as a footnote underneath the Prezi
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